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3 D0 u' [2 [6 O6 x其實在你背後
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Has a person to wait for you) g6 Z; s) h# I* a# A8 h

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But you actually do not have the feeling
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To assume the post what emotion) K" `- T# X- @. g1 I

4 Q& A: t6 N) T* J! E5 v但你卻沒感覺到任何情感1 A% Z; O# D, L* M

! p9 t0 C8 N; `. FBefore again all nulling operations0 ?8 u& o% L, N5 @9 c; A

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He wants to say well to you
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他想好好對你說
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I like you
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我喜歡妳
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4 R3 r7 a" L+ ?: J& RBut you are actually relentless departure7 R( ?" Q: b: ~0 }4 t
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但你卻毫不留情的離開" [4 H# j4 f) s1 T5 K
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I also can only look at you and others
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我也只能看著妳和別人( l1 V( n3 F% D& Y
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Is hugging opposite party
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, N3 B$ R: m9 b# [因為最近只創作到這邊~!!  Q( O! o: x7 ]* z5 L* r
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3 D! G9 \4 I3 t3 o) W) _7 z後面有在想到的話會在接上~& |# x9 c; Z  `: y( x" l6 D
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