創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!!

楓葉之影

Actually behind you
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其實在你背後
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1 U4 `0 p) W, o9 dHas a person to wait for you+ L6 }( _/ j3 n) }: @+ K
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有個人在等待著妳
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But you actually do not have the feeling
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To assume the post what emotion$ }9 Q, h+ v! {; \

" C) o  ]7 w- {" z  i' {但你卻沒感覺到任何情感/ M& ]) \8 Z  z, b$ O7 ~' W2 d

6 i; }6 Q0 @: ]' qBefore again all nulling operations
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再一切歸零之前
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, o* y9 t6 D8 `  [' vHe wants to say well to you( E: ~: U4 I  O5 g4 X% z# H' H" Q8 Q
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他想好好對你說  M* ]6 }' Z( c# a; D2 @- ^4 `: x4 ?

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' E( P" \4 B; y' C7 IBut you are actually relentless departure/ g+ A8 N) |; c9 |6 N* y) |, D1 P' E
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但你卻毫不留情的離開! ~+ g' {. A9 g7 o
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I also can only look at you and others7 J& D; k7 L. p
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我也只能看著妳和別人! `! W0 J9 }/ R5 s: d2 e

% J7 A! [; k) v: U3 Q0 U  O$ YIs hugging opposite party8 D# \/ t# V. q
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擁抱著對方/ g6 z6 r5 f' U* b) l& l
                                                      
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  h6 ^+ Y) q% r) z( x因為最近只創作到這邊~!!# W, w3 M& c; `9 \9 V: z
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所以~2 q0 ?2 |% B& X, }* ^; r% a  E; Z8 j

, }' I8 S5 F6 O* C後面有在想到的話會在接上~
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