標題: 創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!! [打印本頁] 作者: 楓葉之影 時間: 2010-4-13 20:07 標題: 創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!!
Actually behind you 0 a" D4 e' b4 t1 | h J. N. x) L+ I! e: K& [- A ~
其實在你背後& g$ l9 T8 a4 M4 L: u
4 J3 q9 z9 x% j7 {Has a person to wait for you" [) o% y1 e5 Z! k
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有個人在等待著妳: b Q7 R8 A8 w; ~
8 N3 a4 X% m Z' L+ e# @. {But you actually do not have the feeling 2 g0 h: t }+ B 9 r0 {. v; q. Y; T' v: aTo assume the post what emotion ( [2 h# J. @# Z6 E 5 {! E7 [! W3 O( H$ U8 v: D但你卻沒感覺到任何情感, S2 k3 c3 `' D0 |
* @. S" l1 ~% f/ P* OBefore again all nulling operations1 Z$ f% A( Y. `" P
9 I9 a+ V8 A8 x# P再一切歸零之前1 S2 @( W/ w( Y9 O* ?
+ C7 M$ t( v4 b; s9 U' k* _He wants to say well to you : z' {( d! S9 ?6 J! } , s- R) Z0 \' {. M" m3 M1 N他想好好對你說 5 {6 I( F; k% n o% S4 n) }% b5 l6 G4 s; s: a* q
I like you * J! q0 `5 }" n! x5 F& W3 G; \ 1 ~& v$ g- F1 m( I8 l4 d7 X3 w) [ P' z我喜歡妳 # C3 J* C6 w9 f) ]( b6 q) D 4 |3 [! Y! Z8 \7 aBut you are actually relentless departure$ M9 C1 c0 G' }, f& ]: k9 z. Q
8 l& O. K3 {$ o但你卻毫不留情的離開5 \; n. L; X) l/ y$ t7 D3 C+ z- |
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I also can only look at you and others3 K* i1 E P- f2 {; n
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我也只能看著妳和別人 ) C( S5 ~7 @4 \+ G 7 ^6 u, u& f. e" Y( bIs hugging opposite party9 _0 c( u" z7 f* {2 I) I# ?) B) ?
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0 e# C( n+ @5 ?: f; @/ `4 c3 H 1 ?' N4 M' Q/ V. `% N因為最近只創作到這邊~!!) m+ g( j- X M0 i! {" \
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後面有在想到的話會在接上~5 c7 l1 t3 i( S5 c1 I) d
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還有 大家講評看看吧~~
